Saturday, May 17, 2014

Twelve Points - A Reprise


Originally posted in 2010 for Big Tent, a defunct poetry site. This was written to a twelve word wordle. I have changed it some here but the words are still all there.

Twelve Points

Your half-eaten swarm,
your answer will light us up
in frames of debris,
piles a child might build
on a temporary dock
of echoes called up
from the smoke, your skirt
swirled to embellish inner
grit.

What's evidence
to me? A long chant,
proof of your sturdy backbone
in the scheme of things.

September 16, 2010 6:23 AM

For the original blog and poem, go to the blog post for September 16, 2010, also titled Twelve Points.

2 comments:

  1. Nice reprise. Looks more than 12 points to me. Much much more.

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    1. I should list the words, I guess. The poem used these twelve words, which are the twelve points: skirt, child, swarm, debris, dock, evidence, chant, half-eaten, embellish, backbone, answer, temporary.

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The chicken crossed the road. That's poultry in motion.


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