Sunday, February 2, 2014

I'm Glad That's Over

Brenda Warren's Sunday Whirl, Wordle 146

I'm Glad That's Over

It's all synergy,
that's what you've claimed all at once
as if your balance
depends on it now.
My potential sense of things
requires alternate
garden paths to run
and I've tiptoed along one,
one bucolic stripe
among the others.
I do fear I'll miss some routes
though I am open
still to your former
choices. There's a stronger edge
to your harmonics
these days, not like tunes
we shared back when we partnered up
on our last dope run.

‎February ‎2, ‎2014 12:40 PM

4 comments:

  1. mmmm this is very good
    yes i can claim those things
    i always hope it is a little bit me
    the one you write to

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    1. I came across a photo of you and thought the same, that I hope you think of me a little bit.

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  2. I certainly didn't expect that last line. Wonderful!

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  3. Such an intriguing poem...I'll be mulling this one over for a while...nicely done.

    http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2014/02/here-where-lie-former.html

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The chicken crossed the road. That's poultry in motion.


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