I Has Spoken!
I will leave you there,
right behind the translucent
lace arrowed in space
in gravitic drapes
aimed at your neck blushing pink
as if inviting
me to second thoughts
in re my inner demons
but no, I'm going
to Colorado
with my guitar and my dog,
just like I damn said.
September 14, 2014 11:25 AM
Keep on truckin'!!!! Excellent write. xo
ReplyDeleteStrong, sharp writing...
ReplyDeleteGreat twist and away we go ~ on the road again!
ReplyDeletewhole new perspective on the photo from this :)
ReplyDeletelove the feeling of this...on you go!!
ReplyDeleteI see you have determination eloquently written
ReplyDeleteI do believe you wrote a beautiful song here, of parting, of a new unpredictable future--as if any is!
ReplyDeleteLike your "take"...
Yours is the first one I have read. I loved it. The ending was great. If she stops hiding behind the curtains, does she get to go? Or is she hiding because she's being left no matter what, damn it? I'm curious.
ReplyDeletewonderful...enjoyed reading.....
ReplyDeletebeautiful take on the prompt esp the lines-
ReplyDeleteI will leave you there,
right behind the translucent
lace arrowed in space
I liked the blushing pink neck. Nice writing.
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