Sunday, September 14, 2014

I Has Spoken! - A Magpie Tale

The photo "Morning Curtains" chosen by Tess as a writing prompt for this Sunday's Magpie Tales: Mag 237

I Has Spoken!

I will leave you there,
right behind the translucent
lace arrowed in space
in gravitic drapes
aimed at your neck blushing pink
as if inviting
me to second thoughts
in re my inner demons
but no, I'm going
to Colorado
with my guitar and my dog,
just like I damn said.

‎September ‎14, ‎2014 11:25 AM

11 comments:

  1. Keep on truckin'!!!! Excellent write. xo

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  2. Great twist and away we go ~ on the road again!

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  3. whole new perspective on the photo from this :)

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  4. love the feeling of this...on you go!!

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  5. I see you have determination eloquently written

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  6. I do believe you wrote a beautiful song here, of parting, of a new unpredictable future--as if any is!
    Like your "take"...

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  7. Yours is the first one I have read. I loved it. The ending was great. If she stops hiding behind the curtains, does she get to go? Or is she hiding because she's being left no matter what, damn it? I'm curious.

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  8. beautiful take on the prompt esp the lines-
    I will leave you there,
    right behind the translucent
    lace arrowed in space

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  9. I liked the blushing pink neck. Nice writing.

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The chicken crossed the road. That's poultry in motion.


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