I Shall Take Steps
On the sweeter sea
phosphorescent curling shape
bursts into the air
and flits, then rains down
upon us, the crew
standing on the edge
at the rail, so to now speak
or perhaps one is
on the plank waiting
that command to walk further,
one step further than
all the edges here.
May 2, 2013 10:02 AM
Hey, Christopher-- I am glad to be back after a bit of a hiatus for the big C. Gosh... I loved this poem and image. the little bird is such a sublime inspiration and a wonderful protagonist!! nicely done.
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