CLIMBING THE MOUNTAIN
I burned incense, swept the earth, and waited
for a poem to come . . .
Then I laughed, and climbed the mountain,
leaning on my staff.
How I'd love to be a master
of the blue sky's art:
see how many sprigs of snow-white cloud
he's brushed in so far today.
- Yuan Mei
I am framed in archetype, framed in Moon in Pisces, in a form called a bucket, but not so extreme as to be held as one holds a handle. Indeed my form is difficult as well as easy, most of a grand cross as well as grand trine. Hidden within this mostly regular shape are lines of fate. I have never been in charge of my own life as some are. In my height I am expansive, and tell my stories but in my depth lies the cool dark of the open ocean and I am too far from land for landing and for comfort. But I am wise, Oh my Son, Oh my Daughter, and Brother, Sister, I sing the very lines that hold the stars in place.
Here is the Moon, coming for me

Moon In Pisces
Moon has been my guide
as I quest for the old cup,
following the path
of her rays.
She lies
in my heart as a wanton
in my bed, hungry
and taking all I
offer, demanding yet more
before she wanes, wanes
and I fade with her.
I've gone further than my eyes,
shining, free of shame,
at last, free of shame.
September 7, 2009 2:13 PM
a beautiful post, from the beginning quote from Lewis to your noble poem. what a wonderful inspiring reverie.
ReplyDeletei am working on a piece about the moon right now, and this post really spoke to me.
now, i have much more to ponder.
I love the last stanza most of all.
ReplyDeleteThank you both.
ReplyDeleteRachel, interesting, since I reworked my original poem, and that last stanza is yesterday's work. The original last stanza didn't work by my lights.
I came from Erin's blog, in search of more poets.
ReplyDeleteThank you for leaving a comment. This blog is a bit more than just poetry but so is Erin's. Erin is one of my best poet friends. More than that, I think. She is one of the people I wish didn't live clear across the continent and in another country. I would like to visit and joke around and stuff with her and Robert both, and admire her children too.
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