Was so long ago
and she sang it as I lived,
no hollow spaces
just the corners turned
and standing right proud in light
of the noonday shift.
I can hardly take
the force of it in my gut.
I will come undone.
Oh sometimes I don't
get how they stand in the front
and take the crowd's roar
or how you are on
time like this, always on time.
I started running
late, always too late
to catch your ever loving
ways, not for years now.
April 20, 2014 10:27 PM
Written in collaboration with Irene Toh of Singapore: Both Sides Now
To be complete, here is the Wikipedia history site on the song, Both Sides Now
Of course, the version of Both Sides Now that I knew so long ago- released in1967 was sung by Judy Collins. I listened to this album on a friend's hi-fi system in his home in East Pakistan. He was in the diplomatic corps and I was in exile.
According to this history, Joni wrote the song, was friends with Judy who snapped it right off the writing desk for her 1967 album "Wildflowers". Joni didn't record it til later even though she wrote it.
Some years ago my poetry took on a mythic flavor and I became a character in my own poems, a mage, "the man of the Northern Wall". This apellation is not completely fictional. My middle name is Noordwal, a Dutch term for north wall, though in current Dutch it mainly means north bank as in riverbank. I was told that an ancestor, a Portugese Jew escaping the Inquisition, settled in a small Dutch town and took this name from where he settled, near the north wall of the town. I have thought for a long time that -wal meant wall, think my mother told me that. A linguist might say that my usage is no longer common, is an older usage, but then the Inquisition happened in Portugal a few centuries ago, right around the time the Moors lost control of the Iberian Peninsula and the Jews lost the modest protection given them by Islam. Now I write as this mage, my poetry persona.
Mechanical designer for industry, now retired, once a Bay Area Hippie, went undercover in 1972, I've been writing poetry for years.
Contact: 3topper45@gmail.com
Of course, the version of Both Sides Now that I knew so long ago- released in1967 was sung by Judy Collins. I listened to this album on a friend's hi-fi system in his home in East Pakistan. He was in the diplomatic corps and I was in exile.
ReplyDeleteAccording to this history, Joni wrote the song, was friends with Judy who snapped it right off the writing desk for her 1967 album "Wildflowers". Joni didn't record it til later even though she wrote it.
ReplyDeleteSo the song moves with us through our stages...like a good song should. So glad you're back!
ReplyDeleteIt all has memories, every damn song out there, I swear. I prefer Joni to Judy, she has a voice thats kinder on my ears, in some way.
ReplyDeleteYou've been busy since the last time I looked, Yes, welcome back