Jacek Yerka calls this one Autumn In Madeira,
Chosen by Tess for today's Magpie Tale
I am calling this one Sanctuary
Also, in response to Brenda Warren's Wordle 180 - The Sunday Whirl
It's A New Day
I sticks tight nearby
my new found identity
while you polarize
the ashes fear make
and pour them on the bare lot
next door.
Discernment
is required, selfless
love too.
You are no posey
day tripper looking
for joy in the flames.
At least we escaped the dread,
the dun rabbit run
and all the craters
the bombs left behind telling
us to dive, dive, dive.
September 28, 2014 12:50 PM
The Old Neighborhood
Both original and ingenious.
ReplyDeleteDive for sanctuary...it's what we almost do in our ways to keep our identity safe from bombs and raiders
ReplyDeletegreat rhythm!
ReplyDeleteVery much enjoyed...stick tight...
ReplyDeleteVery creative.
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