Wednesday, August 27, 2014

Metaphysics - We Wordle #25


Metaphysics

How am I to know
the deep veined and pondered truth
without her left hand
spiral down the hall?
This suits my so large sleeping
dog just fine. I am
dismissed by spacetime.
I find no solace in the moment.
The four open holes
are traps of a sort
the dog left for me as she
looked for our way out.

‎August ‎27, ‎2014 3:12 PM

Spacetime Dimensionality - We are here in the four open holes of spacetime.


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  1. AnonymousAugust 28, 2014 at 8:02 AM

    This is excellent. I especially love this part:

    "How am I to know
    the deep veined and pondered truth
    without her left hand
    spiral down the hall?
    This suits my so large sleeping"

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  2. AnonymousAugust 28, 2014 at 9:11 AM

    "deep veined and pondered truth" marvelous phrase.

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  3. christopherAugust 28, 2014 at 10:23 AM

    Thank you both for your gracious comments

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  4. christopherAugust 28, 2014 at 10:26 AM

    I need to point out that I should share the glory of this phrase with the poets who first used the words "veined" and "pondered" so

    Thank you, Irene and Laura.

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  5. jozienAugust 28, 2014 at 9:28 PM

    and thank you Christopher, for all this and more

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  6. AnonymousAugust 30, 2014 at 8:11 PM

    I find no solace in the moment is true for many. Deep veined and pondered truth, yep, I like that.

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The chicken crossed the road. That's poultry in motion.

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