Monday, August 10, 2015

Dolphins



I keep writing as if it makes a difference.
I hope my words are as deep as they seem.

Say the same thing this way:

The ocean's deep beneath my leaky boat.
I hope the bailing can is sufficient.

In the distance there are dolphins.

‎August ‎10, ‎2015 1:05 PM

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7 comments:

  1. UnknownAugust 10, 2015 at 5:36 PM

    Exquisite.

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  2. UnknownAugust 10, 2015 at 8:39 PM

    Lovely. Immortality

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  3. jozienAugust 10, 2015 at 9:34 PM

    wow

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  4. Anthony DuceAugust 11, 2015 at 5:58 AM

    Perfect.

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  5. mittensAugust 12, 2015 at 4:29 PM

    what they said. me too.

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  6. christopherAugust 12, 2015 at 6:08 PM

    Thank you all. It is so kind of you to mention your visits. This poem needs work if I ever feel I can reach the words. I believe you are all seeing what it can be not what it really is.

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  7. mittensAugust 13, 2015 at 3:27 PM

    sometimes it isnt what you add, but what you take out. Just sayin'.

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The chicken crossed the road. That's poultry in motion.

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