Wednesday, April 25, 2012

Lover's Dispute - Three Word Wednesday



Thom writes:
Each week, I post three words. You write something using the words.

Then come back and post a link to the contribution with Mr. Linky (but please, link to the exact post, not your blog, by clicking on the exact post title and paste it to Mr. Linky below). As always, there's no hard-and-fast rule that you have to post on Wednesday.

This week's words:

Bloody; Kinky; Tender.

Lover's Dispute

You're such a bloody
load, a sour kinky loser.
I've tried the hard
way and the tender.
Nothing touches you, nothing!
You just keep going
as if no matter
how much the goddam coke cost
and how much we need
to sell. Up your nose,
your ruined crusty nostrils.
You don't leave me none!

April 25, 2012 8:59 AM

5 comments:

  1. Are they in love with each other any more or the coke..the dialogue tripped off the tongue..sharp as a blade..Jae

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  2. Sad how true this is for some people.

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  3. Sad but true for some. Very sharp write. I liked it.

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  4. A glimpse. Fully telling and tightly written.

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  5. Who loves who, loves what?

    Well recorded!

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The chicken crossed the road. That's poultry in motion.


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