Thom writes:
Each week, I post three words. You write something using the words.
Then come back and post a link to the contribution with Mr. Linky (but please, link to the exact post, not your blog, by clicking on the exact post title and paste it to Mr. Linky below). As always, there's no hard-and-fast rule that you have to post on Wednesday.
This week's words:
Bloody; Kinky; Tender.
Lover's Dispute
You're such a
bloody
load, a sour
kinky loser.
I've tried the hard
way and the
tender.
Nothing touches you, nothing!
You just keep going
as if no matter
how much the goddam coke cost
and how much we need
to sell. Up your nose,
your ruined crusty nostrils.
You don't leave me none!
April 25, 2012 8:59 AM
Are they in love with each other any more or the coke..the dialogue tripped off the tongue..sharp as a blade..Jae
ReplyDeleteSad how true this is for some people.
ReplyDeleteSad but true for some. Very sharp write. I liked it.
ReplyDeleteA glimpse. Fully telling and tightly written.
ReplyDeleteWho loves who, loves what?
ReplyDeleteWell recorded!