tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post6804591148897823742..comments2023-10-28T04:53:32.505-07:00Comments on View From The Northern Wall: My Discomfort - 3WW (The Hangover)christopherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-48707958742583622782012-05-03T13:13:19.243-07:002012-05-03T13:13:19.243-07:00Poignant piece.Poignant piece.Angelhttp://angelsharums-storyboard.blogspot.com/2012/05/eat-your-words.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-7468388520174311462012-05-03T09:25:37.810-07:002012-05-03T09:25:37.810-07:00It's almost like cheating but I have changed t...It's almost like cheating but I have changed the poem to tighten things up and it's gotten a new name too. Thanks for the comments which have adjusted my vision, especially Jae's. I think I started thinking of a hangover but wanted to go somewhere else, but that was before I actually found and added the photo.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-50987087085086175712012-05-03T05:14:53.101-07:002012-05-03T05:14:53.101-07:00Despite the (adorable) doggie with a sore head..i ...Despite the (adorable) doggie with a sore head..i think there is much substance in your poem..the discomfort palpable..like a headache! JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-26351338339207786982012-05-03T00:59:47.544-07:002012-05-03T00:59:47.544-07:00I am not sure whether he has a hang dog look with ...I am not sure whether he has a hang dog look with a doggy hangover or just the weight of the ice pack on his head. Either way the post and the picture are a delight.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-63690960898460858292012-05-02T23:23:30.626-07:002012-05-02T23:23:30.626-07:00It's a sharp left turn from the serious to the...It's a sharp left turn from the serious to the absurd. :Dchristopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-66398660307232207032012-05-02T20:14:28.208-07:002012-05-02T20:14:28.208-07:00Ha, what's this....a dog with a hangover?Ha, what's this....a dog with a hangover?rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-89302233834506335622012-05-02T19:19:11.794-07:002012-05-02T19:19:11.794-07:00lovely well done.lovely well done.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.com