tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post4363459514685337460..comments2023-10-28T04:53:32.505-07:00Comments on View From The Northern Wall: At Least I'm Asking You - A Magpie Talechristopherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-22275245209178919422014-07-05T14:44:17.669-07:002014-07-05T14:44:17.669-07:00Methinks she was besotted by you? I like your styl...Methinks she was besotted by you? I like your style. Well done.<br /><br />Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02353700576663217563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-8976834546092256032014-07-03T19:43:45.653-07:002014-07-03T19:43:45.653-07:00leaving feather prints behind..I really like that ...leaving feather prints behind..I really like that line..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-52614960567650209402014-07-01T15:25:00.510-07:002014-07-01T15:25:00.510-07:00Yes and that aloofness inspired my whole take actu...Yes and that aloofness inspired my whole take actually. I imagined the irritation it might cause and even though my desire was still strong.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-47430579994490490432014-07-01T15:23:30.274-07:002014-07-01T15:23:30.274-07:00Kind of you to say so. Thank you.Kind of you to say so. Thank you.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-49377099405472285502014-07-01T15:21:45.862-07:002014-07-01T15:21:45.862-07:00Why?
Why?<br />christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-76430208906481221832014-07-01T14:23:21.762-07:002014-07-01T14:23:21.762-07:00Always ask - no matter how small the fruit!Always ask - no matter how small the fruit!Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-58460993751409949852014-07-01T11:23:29.697-07:002014-07-01T11:23:29.697-07:00I love this. Forgetting how to shuffle, stacking ...I love this. Forgetting how to shuffle, stacking the deck, and yet brave enough to ask for a bite of her fruit. She seems aloof to me though. Nice writing. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-1732770385759734122014-07-01T08:07:49.369-07:002014-07-01T08:07:49.369-07:00Hehehe! One must! Hehehe! One must! 21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-33206278979549393142014-07-01T06:40:44.818-07:002014-07-01T06:40:44.818-07:00stack the damm deck and stick with me- nicestack the damm deck and stick with me- niceAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01921287017261619201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-16828868131379548562014-06-30T19:48:53.519-07:002014-06-30T19:48:53.519-07:00Um...see the answer below about being a gentleman....Um...see the answer below about being a gentleman.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-33451575055224770272014-06-30T19:48:08.744-07:002014-06-30T19:48:08.744-07:00I hate to steal but if I must...I hate to steal but if I must...christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-18357078512772182842014-06-30T19:47:39.687-07:002014-06-30T19:47:39.687-07:00Not me. Most poems I write from a character. The...Not me. Most poems I write from a character. They are fictions. I'm seriously lacking the skill and grace of a gentleman. I make up for it with shyness and fear.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-33497232498484468782014-06-30T19:45:39.731-07:002014-06-30T19:45:39.731-07:00When birds fly into windows full on they leave oil...When birds fly into windows full on they leave oily marks of feathers behind. Birds preen the feathers using a gland. In ducks this is especially heavy because it is waterproofing, but in all birds the same because soggy feathers won't work and rain is on all of them.<br />christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-78904361834614100142014-06-30T16:24:51.885-07:002014-06-30T16:24:51.885-07:00No way, she is not sharing even a bite. You can s...No way, she is not sharing even a bite. You can see it in her eyes! Ha! Ha!21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-77695153260029999882014-06-30T14:59:21.756-07:002014-06-30T14:59:21.756-07:00I am sure she will give you the fruit,
Loved your...I am sure she will give you the fruit,<br /><br />Loved your poem and as Jinksy says, You are a gentleman. Hope the lady appreciated it.<br /><br />~ Eddie<br /><a href="http://eddybluelights.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Clouds and Silvery Linings</a>Eddie Bluelightshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18069024660422117718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-76590808375510431682014-06-30T13:12:03.057-07:002014-06-30T13:12:03.057-07:00love the feather prints....great piece..xlove the feather prints....great piece..xKayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16584116146098939783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-73002160279465602922014-06-30T09:57:13.155-07:002014-06-30T09:57:13.155-07:00What a gentleman you are, to pose such a question!...What a gentleman you are, to pose such a question! LOLJinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-57929528996466561552014-06-30T01:06:00.182-07:002014-06-30T01:06:00.182-07:00EnjoyedEnjoyedAnthony Ducehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17476865809734682418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-89356108955618836412014-06-29T23:31:04.591-07:002014-06-29T23:31:04.591-07:00enjoyable poem. enjoyable poem. BelindaBroughtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07869532077301104783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-45338723483025853692014-06-29T20:13:40.070-07:002014-06-29T20:13:40.070-07:00Go ahead... eat the fruit! Great poem!Go ahead... eat the fruit! Great poem!Dana Dampierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00711570817935555856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-25827816021775442902014-06-29T16:52:26.194-07:002014-06-29T16:52:26.194-07:00nice verse
nice verse<br />Wanderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12384347526625976847noreply@blogger.com