tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post3534529767058985081..comments2023-10-28T04:53:32.505-07:00Comments on View From The Northern Wall: This Is Not Heavychristopherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-59089239377172816402010-11-01T15:40:04.436-07:002010-11-01T15:40:04.436-07:00I really like this, and I might be able to conjure...I really like this, and I might be able to conjure up a response, later. It has a particular appeal to me. xoRachelWhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18225401230724459199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-61868324817180993012010-11-01T13:47:45.120-07:002010-11-01T13:47:45.120-07:00I'll follow you there :D This is wonderful. ...I'll follow you there :D This is wonderful. Thank you.<br /><br /><b>Pink Rain</b><br /><br />I hope you get it, <br />get how difficult it is<br />to turn wood into<br />lighter than air craft.<br />It may appear that I am <br />all giggles and grins<br />but the spells I wove<br />took the stuffing out of me,<br />have left me hollow,<br />cracked and now leaking<br />the hydraulics of my soul,<br />an oily pink rain.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-504208532221143022010-11-01T13:39:36.536-07:002010-11-01T13:39:36.536-07:00Rachel, yes, I wrote this poem a year ago. I agre...Rachel, yes, I wrote this poem a year ago. I agree. Things in general are much heavier now. I think I may have navigated a couple of hard turns and come out all right but the timing of my aging process seems to have sped up. That's unsettling.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-11926572180405846922010-11-01T13:24:49.640-07:002010-11-01T13:24:49.640-07:00Your bright new high
You’ve found a way
to carv...<b> Your bright new high </b><br /><br />You’ve found a way <br />to carve knotwood <br />into balsam wings, <br />and there you glide <br />all grins above the street<br /> <br />even your ragged cuffs <br />stay clean now, as <br />your giggle swells<br />on your bright new high<br /> <br />your eyes graze me and <br />I wonder what you see<br />since they throw off <br />shards of blue and green,<br />no hint refracted <br />from my bitter grime<br /><br />(I'll blog this later)RachelWhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18225401230724459199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-38856815538020499442010-11-01T13:10:57.106-07:002010-11-01T13:10:57.106-07:00I wish I could be in that place, too. Everything s...I wish I could be in that place, too. Everything seems so heavy.RachelWhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18225401230724459199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-70079578222003100522010-11-01T10:08:59.004-07:002010-11-01T10:08:59.004-07:00Manik, I appreciate your attention to detail.Manik, I appreciate your attention to detail.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-48311750210359920772010-11-01T09:25:58.806-07:002010-11-01T09:25:58.806-07:00beautiful expressions chris,
'two letters red...beautiful expressions chris,<br /><br />'two letters reduced from the five...'<br />that was a maverick's touch....manik sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18055072451804840121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-33377882579892633342010-11-01T08:57:37.329-07:002010-11-01T08:57:37.329-07:00Thank you, lakeviewer, and how're things down ...Thank you, lakeviewer, and how're things down at the coast?<br /><br />Annie, it's on the warm lap of sunset and in my easy heart. :)<br /><br />The burden might fall off my lap. I wiggles a bit.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-48425080268617342010-11-01T08:41:13.705-07:002010-11-01T08:41:13.705-07:00Beautiful Christopher...the burden, your lap, I am...Beautiful Christopher...the burden, your lap, I am comforted.Wine and Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06778785233226804217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-31182322553540814312010-10-31T20:38:58.540-07:002010-10-31T20:38:58.540-07:00So strong, so rich!So strong, so rich!Rosaria Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133147851332084180noreply@blogger.com