tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post2679187903436661510..comments2023-10-28T04:53:32.505-07:00Comments on View From The Northern Wall: Faith's Remembrancechristopherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-38206631691608282402010-03-11T19:39:47.970-08:002010-03-11T19:39:47.970-08:00In The Moonshine
I don't know if you
can get ...<b>In The Moonshine</b><br /><br />I don't know if you<br />can get how this is for me<br />as you stand beneath<br />the moon in silver<br />rays, unearthly as you are<br />in this raw moment.<br /><br />You said you just might<br />understand me this one time<br />and the ache in me,<br />the ache in my bones<br />has begun to part like reeds<br />on the verge of things.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-44414794546879155452010-03-11T19:30:41.166-08:002010-03-11T19:30:41.166-08:00Ghost, she did pack my lunch. I am sure of it. S...Ghost, she did pack my lunch. I am sure of it. She did not pack special little things in my lunch. It was just lunch. There were plenty like me, most kids I think, though there were a bunch of kids who ate cafeteria food and also a bunch who ate snack food. We had a snack bar too. <br /><br />I like your poem, kind of ectoplasmic if I may not say so.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-28863262699988164002010-03-11T18:56:49.155-08:002010-03-11T18:56:49.155-08:00I like this; I feel as if I truly understand the s...I like this; I feel as if I truly understand the sentiment.RachelWhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18225401230724459199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-51782976791850950682010-03-11T17:27:48.858-08:002010-03-11T17:27:48.858-08:00sometimes i take your mother's never packing y...sometimes i take your mother's never packing your lunch for granted as well.... it could have been something special to appreciate at the time. perhaps something of which you were so fond that you would have to hide if from your classmates so they won't tease you and call you a "Momma's Boy".<br /><br />but you do remember what she never did, and in some way there is a fondness in that too...<br /><br /><a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_nKa-dM7PvEo/SWp--g9urQI/AAAAAAAADSU/BUBG6eHQaAc/s400/GuardianAngel1.jpg" rel="nofollow">of course, i never said this.....</a><br /><br />i remember<br />what you never did<br />now that you're not here<br />i flip these pictures in my head<br />until you're motion's clear<br />remembering what you did not<br />to assuage some fear<br />remembering what<br />you never did<br />is how i hold you dear<br /><br />it was nothing<br />GDGhost Dansinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15216056025402469120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-47092821285277492262010-03-11T13:47:55.765-08:002010-03-11T13:47:55.765-08:00Linda and HB, thank you for your kindnesses toward...Linda and HB, thank you for your kindnesses toward my work.<br /><br />Welcome, Maha.<br /><br />Annie, I think that there were kids who cherished the attention, but just tried not to share it so they wouldn't get the flack.<br /><br />Jesus, is that you?? Thanks for making a comment. Thank you for your kindness. You are right I think, that my voice may be mine but what I write about belongs to many people.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-80234923592171213492010-03-11T12:38:19.896-08:002010-03-11T12:38:19.896-08:00the beauty of nature is its simplicity.
and in my...the beauty of nature is its simplicity.<br /><br />and in my oppinion this work of your, is just that. <br />it is something that I, myself, have always thought about.<br /><br />thank you.<br />for sharing.<br /><br />JesusAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-55565165693043631642010-03-11T08:31:25.392-08:002010-03-11T08:31:25.392-08:00Very tender. And you brought to mind, some 15 year...Very tender. And you brought to mind, some 15 years ago, when school lunches were part of my morning, and the absolute stealth with which I packed special treats and smiley faced their napkins. Such joy in it for me, anticipating their surprise. For them...probably embarassment.Wine and Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06778785233226804217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-74042539710043250682010-03-11T05:35:04.417-08:002010-03-11T05:35:04.417-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Mahahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09044365084432889661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-8381013461980972402010-03-10T21:41:22.512-08:002010-03-10T21:41:22.512-08:00am with Linda!
also i add sublime...
the image is ...am with Linda!<br />also i add sublime...<br />the image is so real and palpable but the feeling it creates is so unworldly and beautiful...<br /><br />yes... it's never for good... never...<br />those particles that radiate forever...human beinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09232419187783429903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2377252801421681569.post-34198323579493257442010-03-10T20:45:13.997-08:002010-03-10T20:45:13.997-08:00Christopher this is so poignant and beautiful
Lind...Christopher this is so poignant and beautiful<br />LindaLinda S. Sochahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03281672541959206302noreply@blogger.com